Well,
I decided I needed a murder mystery in my Microsoft folder, so here it is so far.
PLEASE critique me^^
And excuse any mistakes. This is a rough draft...
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"What a cake," Bobby's mother whispered to Camber's. Today was Camber's special day, her tenth birthday, and she had the cake of her dreams. They had it specially made at a friend's bakery and it looked wonderful. It was a huge two tier cake covered with different colored fondant and Barbie memorabilia. Cammie practically fainted when it arrived and thanked the baker heartily with hugs. There was something creepy and